Need help with lyrics please what do ya think if this song?

So heres a song i wrote while in was bored in english i need opinions and help please and constructive criticism. friends and i are starting a band and our mothers just say great job so we dont know if its actually goog so.... You're like a tornado you're sucking me in it may seem crazy but you're starting to win, i can't fight this any more your bringing me down you're winning this war and what can i do and what can i do, like a tornado sucking me in, wreaking havoc all on your own, all your own. Soon i'll be gone and soon i'll then who will you pull in with your charisma who's life will you destroy next? You're like a tornado you're sucking me in it may seem crazy but you;re starting to win you once looked so inviting now i don't know, i don't know about you anymore whoa oh anymore